Sweet and a lot of truth as well. Flow was excellent although I wish it was longer but its good to keep us wanting more XD

I still remember my first love, she will always be in the back of my mind. she wont leave me. this poem, gee, it was excellent. made me think of times when i was younger. (if thats a good thing or not)

i loved this poem. thank you for sharing this with me.

5/5 David

Hey great work...lovely flow...perfect rythm...n i bet this is exactly hw first love goes ahead........Very sweet work...kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

I still remember my first love, too. [Probably because we only broke up four months ago, but yeah...] Despite the fact that he's a complete ass now, it's true: I won't forget him. This poem was wonderful, and so true.

I enjoyed this poem alot at first when reading this i thought it was going to be about the sadness of longing for the one you first fell inlove with or so on you get my drift but this poem really bought first love to a whole new level well done with this stunning piece of poetry~mel

Beautiful poem and so true. Great job!

Short and sweet...so true...first love always leaves an indelible mark upon the tender young heart! Nicely flows with deep meaning....All the best, Debbie

Aw that was so good....I've actually just started getting over my first love.....I haven't cried over it for a while. But of course, I'll never forget him.

Really true but in some how u will forget wht u left behind...maybe im wrong
Good one!!

God bless u

Very true words. I totally agree with you. First love is always first love and it really leaves a scar. Thanx for correcting me on my masterpiece. I wrote that one for a challange. He he :D Great poem 5/5

Awww i can relate this poem captures every feeling that really goes through you great job

laura

Wow this was flawless, each verse fit in with the next one so perfectly. And for such a short poem it sure packed a punch. Everyone says that no matter what happens you will never forget your first love I definatly agree with that one I just wish I knew why that was. Amazing job, well done. I cant even pick my favorite stanza or line because each one was better than the last. Nice work.

Wow this was flawless, each verse fit in with the next one so perfectly. And for such a short poem it sure packed a punch. Everyone says that no matter what happens you will never forget your first love I definatly agree with that one I just wish I knew why that was. Amazing job, well done. I cant even pick my favorite stanza or line because each one was better than the last. Nice work.

Aww, short but sweet.
These three stanzas say everything about a perfect love.
You flow was flawless and your meaning was pure & true.
Great job!
5/5

XxAmberxX

Awww, so true!! Breathtakingly beautiful.