My Birthday Wish

by Mousie   May 7, 2007


Lost in the moment
Enchanting eyes meet mine,
Sweep me off my feet
Love is not so blind.

Swiftly through the woods we walk
Lovebirds flying by,
Lay me down so gentely
Come now, don't be shy.

Checkered red and pearl white
Picnic blanket smiles,
Nature is the only world
Heard around for miles.

Swinging on the swing
A kiss you shall embellish,
Tonight's a night of sweetened love
This is my birthday wish.

Saturday is my sweet sixteen, and i'm so happy because i get to spend that special day with my baby. these are the things i wanna do on my bday, he said we could do whatever pleased me :D. i can't wait!!! come faster Saturday!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so pretty!
    I was pulled in from the opening and from there on it just kept getting better and better.
    Flow was perfect throughout, and I loved the ending.

  • 16 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    5/5 keep it up im loving your stuff!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Happy birthday in advance.....
    i hope you enjoy it and i cannot wait for saturday as well as im going to a party, lol. so over there i will extra dance for your birthday.......

    like always, written greatly.keep it up

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