That was pretty good. the flow was alright, but the word choice was great. Another well done job. keep writting and thanks for sharing. 4/5

This 1 was Good!...good flow n very well penned!..Good job!
Kp it up!
Luv xx Pooja xx

Erm. think you should put on the last of the second stanza you love me for being me instead it just helps the flow. Other than that it was a exellent poem full of emotion :D

xxx alex xxx

Good poem. Very cute ^_^ I really liked the words used. Especcially the 'you love me for me'...Well done!!

Xx Chrissie

This poem is filled with love and promise.
It flowed well and the emotion was shown.
Keep it up 4/5

[Sarah]

The rhythm here is excellent, love the language, imagery, flow, evrything. great poem

kim xx

WOW this is amazing! well done great imagery created here! flow was good! well done keep writing I like these lines

For we are together
you are the only one,
who gives me my wings.