"Yet only few choose to be their own hero,
For people long for touch and compassion.
Women choose to be helpless and insecure
Some concealing their great passion"

Very powerful statement. I liked this poem. the word choice was absoultly amazing. It screamed independence, and that drew me in. I actually was able to keep me intrest all the way though the poem, wonderfully written, excellent job 5/5

Wow, i was impressed. i like the statement and what you had to say. not as impressed with the poem as much as i was the meaning behind it. I think your vocabulary could have been more poetic. Othere then that it was great. Btw sorry i got back to you so late. I broke my arm in a go-kart accident. Thanks for the comment.

God bless

~skittles

Amen. I agree completely. Stand up and be independent.

Nice poem and it was quite a strong statement. But yeah independence is something that you should take and not always be given. Take care
cheers, josh

This is a very unique poem
I really enjoyed reading it
but for some reason it makes me think of a video game
it was good tho
nice imagery

It was a beautiful poem! I like the story behind it. Flow was flawless well done! lol its like a fairy tale good job! 5/5! as always :)