Wow excellent job really enjoyed the flow and wording of this one excellent title choice it fits this piece perfect

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Hey, wow this is a great poem, i liked how you personified the wrists, it was cleverly written and the ending fitted well. excellent writing, keep it up,
take care,
xxEmma xx

Great poem very unique...i liked it ...good job

ashleigh

Very different dont think ive come across a poem like this before. Great job though well thought out!

5/5! I luv it! I really like that u used symbolism. Keep up da good work!

I love the thought into this.YOu went truly deep of what you were thinking.the flow of it is great.I truly enjoy your poetry.

Wow. i love this. I felt emotion. It reallyy made me think. Gj 5/5

=] 5/5. this is really good, it sucks that people have to go through this though. i understand. ttyl . I also liek the personification with the wrists

Wow i love this poem its really good 5/5 ~melissaraye~

Wow.....thats brilliant! i loved it!

xo

Wow i bet this poem means alot to alot of people i loved this poem keep writing your really good
carly

Wow I really like this one it's very deep kinda gives you a look at what a person who cuts is thinking and makes people realize what bullying and stress can do..Great Job

Beck