Great poem:) I really liked it. 5/5

The flow was lovely.
I thought this was a well penned peice.
I loved it, and thought everyword was a great read. I just loved how it went so smoothly and was filled with emotions.
Keep it up,
Elainex

I love poetry about nature!!! This is aweome...

You write a beautiful poem keep up the good work 5/5 Steve

I REALLY enjoyed this one. Really great flow...

Note: "Moonlight shining
upon face"
Shouldn't it say "upon his face"?

Great job! 5/5

Josie