I loved this poems so much. It really Felt so real. Keep up the great work. It Really did touch me.
xoxoibleedregret

Wow so deep loveee it 5/5 cythia m. x]

Bary, dead is dead hahaha well done
ron

Im sorry that I couldnt just choose one part and analyze ( for being my favorite)...because this event which HONESTLY should be under sad poems...started to shake my heart with each new stanza..

this is one of the deepest saddest poem to read from a gd period of time , for it been a while since I had tears while reading a poem..

yet i believe its not the event..its ur word choice..my mother!u u just chose some words that are just perfect for the incident..

I hope this is not a true story..cause u penned it with so much emotions..too deep not to be real

5/5
keep writing!!

I loved this very scary but it paints a clear picture...was kinda confused yet I'm sure I'd understand a second time to read it. Vampire or ghost this deserves a 5+

Well i've nvr wrote ny dark poems b4 but i realy loved ur poem evry thng is mving in flow lyk a river, so many emotion its scary too wat to say 5/5