Oh gee. the sadness thru out this poem was amazing. it was full of hurt and sorrow.

i loved it, somehow i love a sad poem. but the words you used were very gripping and emotional.

5/5 David

Very good
I liked the imagery
it was consistent
and thats always good
I really like the repeating bit
about I'm not okay
this poem was excellent

This is a very cute basic format poem! The message is sad, which is unfortunate, but it is a good poem! 5/5

Beautiful work!!.excellent imagery...usage of simple and powerful vocab used to express emotions has made the poem better.Sad..though but equally great!
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