Awww honeythats sooo sad, aww. its a very strong poem. sopunds very desperate its so sad. well done xx

Awws!!! big hugs!
amanda

Mo it was a great poem, but you shouldn't have to feel like that. did you talk to him or something?

This poem is very sad but well penned.
It flowed well and the structure was good.
The emotion was shown.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

I thought the 4th paragraph could have been better, I mean it's still good. I lvoed the fifth para tho:) Very touching..hehe,...I was reading your profile...so you know where Thailand is? hehe:P Nice poem!

This is a good poem, but I still wish you did not have to think about that. If my mom read this she would flip. You would never hear the end of us.

Aww.. I Know How That Is

Thats sad..
Daddys make me sad, mine died a little over a year ago,
nonetheless, a great poem.
10/5!

This was so sad...wonderful write though. I seriously wish I could give this more than a 5/5. It doesn't do it justice. Very, VERY touching!

So sad many people can relate great job of the feeling and emotion!!
5/5

laura

Oh im sorry that is sad. I like this though

Oh this poem is so sad i can relate to it i have a poem similar its called daddy why?

I loved it, it was sad though but it was a beautifully written piece. it was very powerful and had a lot of emotions behind it. it was a lovely poem to read. nice work 5/5

Oh my gosh.. its SO sad.
Is it a true story?
My gosh Mo...
Well once again,
VERY amazing poem
Im envious.

~A

Voted 5/5 ;)

Hey darl.... 5/5
if this is true Mo....we have a fair bit in common ey....
i love this.. i can relate alot.

but omg.....its great:)