I love sonnets
=]
And this was a gerat sonnet,
It had awesome flow and emotion,
And it was very nicely written.
I'm sure a lot of people will be able to relate to this,
Great job Darling!

5.5
=]

Kyrielle Sonnets seem difficult to handle. Although the word 'that' is unnecessary in the opening line, and that the third stanza is forced, I think that is quite understandable since you are following a strict structure. A very nice love poem, as always, ma'dear. Thanks for sharing! Love, Debbie Cakes =]

Beautiful poem grat job

Yeahh...I guess some of it was a little forced, but since it was such a hard style, I think you did pretty well! Actually, you managed to fit in a touching story...or idea..:S...wtv...but the point is...I loved it:)

Bryan
You always do such a great job on the poetry forms and this is no exception. The imagery is wonderful.

No matter how hard that I try,
I can't help but begin to cry.
From the pain of you leaving me,
Your love is killing me softly.

Loved your opening stanza. Very heart felt.
Take care
Your friend Cindy

Oh! It sounds (and reads) more fluently and fluidly than before. =] Kudos, sweetie!

Bryan, I liked this one. I love the style and yours was well written! Great job! 4o more to go before you hit 1oo! You can do it babe!

<3 5.5

Supurbly written. Such perfect flow. Excellent job!!! 5/5

Josie

I really enjoyed reading it. Flow was good, and again language use is good.

5/5! as always

Great poem. I liked the form you used. The flow was nice and the word choice was really great. I gave it a 5/5.

Comment #2:
This poem has a great moving effect to it. The phrase killing me softly is such an ironic phrase because death is anything but soft of kind. But it describes what you were trying to convey so well. Wonderful job! :)
~Midnight Sun

Really good. I haven't heard of this type of poem before, but I may have to try to write my own. Really great work,
=)

Really good job on this : ) 5/5

I love it! its beautiful! i wish i know how to write Kyrielle Sonnet.... =(

Though choosing a song title for a poem can be difficult or tricky you did it very well!
I love reading sonnets, and how people come up with very artistic and creative poems.
You did a very good job at writing this poem, you really can feel emotion dripping from the paper (sort of speak)
thanks, yet again for the read :)

~*Natasha*~

WOW!! u really know how to write. I tryed so hard to come up with a Kyriell Sonnent...but u make it seem so easy...love the poem...:)