Wondering with you

by Sorefromreality   May 10, 2007


When i lace my hand into yours
I wonder if everyone before was real
I question whether I ever knew passion
And if I've just learned to feel

Sometimes when you look at me
I look back, thinking deeply
I ask myself if the others meant anything
And reminisce on the times I had waited for a phone to ring

When I see you walking towards me
I feel my world begin to shake
You're the first person I've found
That gives more than he takes

When I lace my hand into yours
I know I've never had this
I wonder if everyone before was ever real
Or if every other time was just practice

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  • 16 years ago

    by Laurie Tran

    GOODNESS GRACIOUS .
    I LOVEE` this poem .

    the flow + the emotions + the words = AMAZING .

    oh.. on this line "When I see walking towards me"
    did you meant "When I see you walking towards me?"

    great poem, excellent job !

  • 16 years ago

    by just me

    This is such a simple poem but it's very very good. I'm addin it as one of my fav's (i dont do that to very many cause i only have like 2 on there)
    I love this little masterpeice.
    <3
    L.C
    *plz comment my work*