Comments : One Night Of Bliss ( Collab)

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    With your loves warm caress
    Take me to another place
    Igniting fire in my soul
    Staying forever in your embrace

    Pacifying our bodies needs
    Losing myself in your kiss
    Your touch leaving memories
    Of our one night of bliss

    Hey Cindy,
    Welcome back.. :o)

    Its so nice to have the opportunity of learning from your writing skills and being a part of it.
    I just love the way you brought this theme and the way you started it.

    You Are Still....Simply The Best and thats the way you will always be.

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    I'll repeat what i said to EOE hehe:

    FANTASIC this is really really good, again you have such a way with words its really unlike anything i've even read, you inspire me to keep writing and get to the level at which i see you today. great work!

    xoxo sam

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    As i said to Nitin... what another amazing piece from you two! They keep getting better and better!
    My fave stanza was the second last one, it was so beautiful!
    The whole poem managed to be romantic yet sexy at the same time.
    An amazing collab!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Congratulations on another wonderful collab.You and Nitin have meshed your styles so well it's hard to tell who has written which stanza....all verses are so beautiful...

    Pacifying our bodies needs
    Losing myself in your kiss
    Your touch leaving memories
    Of our one night of bliss

    ^Awesome ending to a beautiful masterpiece!
    Love, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    Such a beautiful poem by two of the best authors on this site, love the flow and i give it another 5/5 as always!!! keep up the great poems cindy!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    "Kiss me beneath my skin
    Drink my lips sweet like wine
    Play with my lonely fingertips
    Touch every vein of mine"

    This is, once again, an astounding piece of collab work, Ms. Cindy! Mergng the intensity of both poet's emotions plus a fine, sensual imagery is enchanting. My pleasure to read. It's a very nice poem. =] Thank you for sharing! Love, Debbie

    p.s. The Tagalog poem is about a person confused with the stares and glances of another person. While being astounded, she realized the sole 'reason' of this and found herself falling for this individual. It's quite sweet! That's why I decided to post it back. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Barry

    Mmmmm
    Squeeze this trigger of love
    Gently blow my soul away
    With your fingers of magic
    Leave scars for every day"

    difficuly choice to pick the best lines..it is that GOOD!! but for me this is it.......
    excellent write both of you!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Barry

    Kiss me beneath my skin
    Drink my lips sweet like wine
    Play with my lonely fingertips
    Touch every vein of mine

    still not sure which is the best verse........

    love is.......

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, very beautiful poem. I love all the lines. It's a wonderful poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Cindy
    Again you and End Of Eternity have out done yourselves with this piece. Very sensual and full of passion. It's hard to believe the way the two of you can put these together living across the world from one another. Excellent work.

    Blend with my soul tonight
    And let me breathe for you
    Wrap my heart within yours
    Melting one body, no more two

    Pacifying our bodies needs
    Losing myself in your kiss
    Your touch leaving memories
    Of our one night of bliss

    These were my favorite parts.
    All the best
    Ben

  • 16 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great poem made. Two birds hitting one stone, breaks the hearts of cold.

    Ray

  • 15 years ago

    by Lyn

    What lovely word pictures, 'Kiss me beneath my skin' 'Let me breathe for you' A marvellously emotional poem of the need for intimacy. Thank you.