Hehehe thats cute :P I advice just tell the guy.. Just be confident on yourself :) and everything will work out :P well written and just like 'Bloody Suicide said' try to 'Make it longer' anyway this is a great poem! keep writing :)

Aw this was a great poem. the ending in some way was not as enjoyable. cuase who would turn down someone as great as you?

this was a lovely poem. yet you think he knows, but do you surely know that he knows that he is cool. sorry if i confuse you..

5/5 your friend, David

It's a sweet poem.

Hey girl!! did he tell you good bye when you told him??? miss you bunches!

Ack! goodbyes are always the worst.
but everything happens for a reason love.

Great poem , well written and wording was great but you have nothing to lose , it you do tell him , so why be scared , if you don't have something ,. then you can't lose it, good job, keep it up,,,,, your friend Tracy d 5/5