Excellent job good flow and the wording was great
Craving indefinite answers,
And my cathartics cure for the itch
great job on this one a lot of emotions sad. 5/5
your friend Tracy

Wow..that was such a great write! i got to say i didn't understand some words but that aint a critic..the wordings were something new to me..and i like it that way! i got the gist and its full of emotion..great work hun..like the work of published poets that im studyin now for my exams =] great work once again, keep it up! and thanks for the comment, very appreciated!
nuff luv xx mezmeryz-->

Excellent job!!...Great...it's filled with powerful emotions...though i have'nt been able to comprehend much of it..i liked your choice of words...and the flow was nice too...kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

Excellent.
you really know how to make words work together.
its absoultely one of my favorites.

The word choice here was just.. amazing.
Simply amazing.
The flow was excellent. Everything basically fit together well. I haven't got a bit of criticism for it. And that's rare with myself and poems.
Very nice job. :]

The word usage here was wonderful, and I liked the references to different literary techniques. Everything was excellently written to a tee. A joy to read.

This poem reminded me of a poem that I could read in a magazine or whatever by a professional writer, haha. I honestly loved this. Your used of words fit and you told the story maturely without going off course. Once again, I enjoyed reading this. =]

5.5
<3

Wow this poem is amazing it actually made me have to grab a dictionary in order to understand everything (which is kind of embarrassing to admit), but I liked that because that means that you didn’t use saturated words or anything like that. I really liked how you described everything.. well done. such a powerful image that you've shown in this peice. It truely is a masterpeice, and you should be very proud of it. I really loved it.. well done.