I love this poem. Well written. Check out my poems when you have the chance. thanx.

This is a great poem, it was very heartfelt, i loved it, 5/5

Once again, the rhyming is perfect! I love it!

A very sweet write, I really enjoyed reading it. Remember though - punctuation is your friend! Haha.

Beautifully written, Deep flowing emtion, the flow is flawless, The word choice is simple yet strong. You did an excelllent job 5/5

Beautifully written poem holding strong emotions throughout the entire thing enjoyed the flow and the ryhme scheme was great. The vocab was simple but yet really strong. Well done on a nicely written piece of poetry~mel

I like the hthe words are well put good jobs so how many poems do i owe you?

Wow I loved this poem. There wasnt anything that I didnt like about it. My favorite part was how you managed to personalize it while still making it vague enough for other people to relate to. I loved the last two lines, managing to take a common phrase and turn it into a magical line of the poem is true tallent. Nice work, I loved this.