Sweet poem...lovely theme!..and well expressed..i find it hard to write an acrostic and lol..u've made it look soo simple n yet beautiful..
Good work!
xxPoojaxx

Awesome! Keep the pen to the paper! *5/5*

Alyson

Well done! ;) Do you like Acrostic form. hehe anyway flow was good! I like the title ;) keep writing!

It was sweet, and it was a great one for you, keep up the good work, 5/5

Very nice and sweet, written and penned very well, keep up the good work, 5/5

Sweet, well written, poem you have here. Again the word choice was excellent, and the imagery again was so beatufilly, done. 5/5 keep up the good work.

Poems about nature arent really my cup of tea, but i like this write. i like the contradictions used (well maybe a storm). made the poem stand better to me.

Great job i suck realy bad at like all thoes typs of poems with names i just write how i write so yehh 5/5

This is an awesome acrostic.

It's like a small song.. very rhythmic and melodious!

I love it!