I liked it even though it is short. I think that it is just fine the way it is. It also has a great flow. 5/5

Short but...the poem has it's own charm!...beautiful write!and it flowed well..
kp up de good wrk!..
5/5
xxPoojaxx

Yes it was short, but I think the length works well for the poem. It was very good. 5/5

Short and nice poem. Enjoyable to read!

This was not short, i like it just the way it is. it was inaginative and so simple and subtle. well done and keep writing.

5/5 David

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It seems done to me too, and done well if I may say so (with my lack of expertise).
It's a great poem; short but concise and well worded.
Keep up the great work, and thank you very much for the comment on Kasumi!
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Thats gooooood. i like it alot. yeah short, but ur right it sounded done :)