by Boy
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It is truth.. very nicely written i noticed you wrote so many natures poems. good. |
by Marc Ortiz
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Well done on this one! great structure! excellent work! keep writing! :) 5/5! |
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I really liked it, you never got of topic and it had a nice flow with almost a melodic rythme to it |
by Vanessa
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Over time it's colors may despair but, |
by Kaila
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Very nice! |
by Zeus
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Its nice to write about the beauty of nature. I liked it was enjoyable. 5/5 |
by ASPHYXIATED
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Rainbows are such beautiful things. |
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Change "there here" to "they're here" |
by Anaisthitos
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It was greatly written, very descriptive. I could picture the rainbow as I read it. The word choice was great and overall the poem was wonderful. Towards the end, though, it wasn't as good, it didn't seem nearly as significant as it did in the beginning, but all together it sounded right. |