Comments : Rainbow (acrostic)

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    It is truth.. very nicely written i noticed you wrote so many natures poems. good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well done on this one! great structure! excellent work! keep writing! :) 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I really liked it, you never got of topic and it had a nice flow with almost a melodic rythme to it

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Over time it's colors may despair but,
    *despair, would sound better as disappear.

    Other than that this is another well done work by you.Again you have mastered this type of poem. The word choice strong, The imagery again beautiful, and vivid. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very nice!
    I really enjoyed just a simple poem 4 a change
    Lately I've been asked to read novels pretty much
    so I enjoyed reading a short nature poem
    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Zeus

    Its nice to write about the beauty of nature. I liked it was enjoyable. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Rainbows are such beautiful things.
    I love them.
    But I think you could've used more descriptive words through out the poem.
    It would've made the images stronger.

    Good work =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Change "there here" to "they're here"
    I like the use of parenthesis in the poem, it adds something to an otherwise ordinary acrostic and doesn't disrupt the poem at all...
    You have good imagery, and I love how you have managed to describe rainbows in such a beautiful way. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    It was greatly written, very descriptive. I could picture the rainbow as I read it. The word choice was great and overall the poem was wonderful. Towards the end, though, it wasn't as good, it didn't seem nearly as significant as it did in the beginning, but all together it sounded right.

    Good job! 4/5