Comments : Your crime

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Quite cute in it's own way.. Liked the flow it was well written. I think I have read this piece by you before. Anyways well done on creating a short poem which held my interest.~mel

  • I know what its like to feel that way. you know that. i know you know what that feels like as well i can tell with how much emotion you put in this poem. it is very well written and the flow is just right. once again great work. please don't stop writing. i love the way you use the words to create your poetry. keep it up!5/5