Another fantastic job =D 5/5 like every other one of yours ^.^
Keep them coming because I really love to read your work =)

I really liked the flow and woridng
And the subject was so unique
Good job
Take care
Laura

This is verry good. and very true! i wish that i could find a plcae so peaceful beyond the twilight!!! 5/5

xo becca xo

Really a great poem, it flowed so nicely and the vocab was wonderful. it was a very intriguing poem, great job 5/5

Oh my. your so young but you write divinely.
you made me jealous. =P
good job
5/5

<33Sparkxx

Wow. this was beautiful, it made me smile, it really is an amazing poem that makes people think as well, the flow was very good and the vocabulary, 5/5
gabriella