Wow i really like this poem......great poem..5/5..........check out some of my poems if u would thankz...

Great poem. i love the emotion.

Cutting poems have become kind of cliche these days everyone seems to be writing in the same way. But you to me, you really brang something a little different to this piece. I'm not quite sure what it is but it was interesting. A good effort ~mel

Not as great as some of your other work. the poem was a bit choppy and didn't have a great flow but other than that it was pretty good. 4/5 keep writing.