"Body losing it's love and warmth.
What am I to do?
Your leaving me so cold and blue."

I loved the way you compared love to warmth and then brought the coldeness in as the loss. It was excellently done
5/5 m'dear
*Gem*

This one is beautiful...well expressed...n u've put in beuty thru' simple choice of words...which gives the poem a powerful lopk...great work!
n i think "Your leaving me so cold n blue"is a good line...but i think it'll look better with "you're"..*just a thought..very good dark poetry..
Kp writing!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Good poem, wit honest emotions. You captured a image of a moment that lot of people went through. 5/5 Keep writing!

Hey! Thanks for the comment. Just pointing out some things

Body losing 'it's' ('its') love and warmth.

'Your' ('You're') leaving me so cold and blue.

Other than that, I think you are good.

The poem was sad. I know what it's like to feel used when you are the one loving them... Good job!

Ciao

Its really i loved it
felt the emotion in it
blue

Im relating to this so much right now.it totally sucks....the poem was simple but at the same time blows you away with each syllable

I love it. it's realli good.
5/5 all the wayy.
<3 manda.

Ooo, I really like this one. A lot of great vocabulary. Good job. :]

Really good. I can really relate to it at the moment. Thanks for the comment on my poem. Keep up the great writing!

Wow. this is really good, it was sad though, but it really puts this image in my head as i read it. thx for the comment, your poems really are amazing
5/5
gabriella

Interesting format, but a well constructed message. I think the non-rhyming is a good idea because it enhances the randomness of the poem, which is effectively the same as a dream. Nice.

Sole. x