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by Goran Rahim
This was sad, but yet written so greatly. you have done a really great job.........
keep it up.
by Black Princess
Ok that ending seriously was awesome... i'm shocked i loved that bit it made that poem.. i was a lil unsure about it but the ending just did it for me so yeah it really worked well done. 5/5
Another great poem. The flow
was great and you had very
well done story told. I enjoyed
your poems and thank you very
much for commenting and rating
mine. God bless 5/5
by xxSnow Angelxx
Beautifully penned...sad yet well written..
The ending really got me..perfect!..n yeah the flow was'nt out of place either...word choice was good...it gave the poem a good effect though...
â€œShe pity's every blade of grass
holding their own
Wondering if they realize
the fury that has grownâ€
^Loved the imagery. Am emotive and solid piece with an intriguing, smooth flow. Very well done :).
by Cella Bella
The flow was a little off here but, it's still an amazing poem. Sad and beautiful all in one. another 5/5 from me
by Noelle Wright
Awh this poem was great cant believe some one so young can write so great WOW the kids on here really SURPRISE me...But this poem was great!! your awesome! =]