Comments : And She Was Gone..

  • 13 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This was sad, but yet written so greatly. you have done a really great job.........
    keep it up.

  • 13 years ago

    by Black Princess

    Ok that ending seriously was awesome... i'm shocked i loved that bit it made that poem.. i was a lil unsure about it but the ending just did it for me so yeah it really worked well done. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Another great poem. The flow
    was great and you had very
    well done story told. I enjoyed
    your poems and thank you very
    much for commenting and rating
    mine. God bless 5/5
    <3tay(^_^)

  • 13 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautifully penned...sad yet well written..
    The ending really got me..perfect!..n yeah the flow was'nt out of place either...word choice was good...it gave the poem a good effect though...
    Liked it..5/5=)
    xxPoojaxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Fluffy

    “She pity's every blade of grass
    holding their own
    Wondering if they realize
    the fury that has grown”

    ^Loved the imagery. Am emotive and solid piece with an intriguing, smooth flow. Very well done :).

  • 13 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    The flow was a little off here but, it's still an amazing poem. Sad and beautiful all in one. another 5/5 from me

    marcella

  • 13 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    Awh this poem was great cant believe some one so young can write so great WOW the kids on here really SURPRISE me...But this poem was great!! your awesome! =]

    Noelle