This was sad, but yet written so greatly. you have done a really great job.........
keep it up.

Ok that ending seriously was awesome... i'm shocked i loved that bit it made that poem.. i was a lil unsure about it but the ending just did it for me so yeah it really worked well done. 5/5

Another great poem. The flow
was great and you had very
well done story told. I enjoyed
your poems and thank you very
much for commenting and rating
mine. God bless 5/5
<3tay(^_^)

Beautifully penned...sad yet well written..
The ending really got me..perfect!..n yeah the flow was'nt out of place either...word choice was good...it gave the poem a good effect though...
Liked it..5/5=)
xxPoojaxx

“She pity's every blade of grass
holding their own
Wondering if they realize
the fury that has grown”

^Loved the imagery. Am emotive and solid piece with an intriguing, smooth flow. Very well done :).

The flow was a little off here but, it's still an amazing poem. Sad and beautiful all in one. another 5/5 from me

marcella

Awh this poem was great cant believe some one so young can write so great WOW the kids on here really SURPRISE me...But this poem was great!! your awesome! =]

Noelle