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Excellent poem, I really enjoyed this, very captivating. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

"Morbid and mangled
Inside of my head
Now my mind is tangled
Dying upon this hospital bed"

wow. amazing poem. loved the end bit.

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