Wow, full of emotion. If this is
true..you're only 12. But anyways
The second to last stanza should be
reduced to fit and match the other
stanzas lines. Keep up the great work.
God bless 5/5
This poem really speaks to me. Like it really paints a picture of whats going on and the way you wrote it... was deep. You can sense the intimacy and emotions going on as the story continues. Your pretty talented. Feel free to message me anytime =]]