Comments : Touch

  • 13 years ago

    by isabel

    I felt so "wow, this is so great"...i'm completely amazed...it's so wonderful...

  • 13 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    I really enjoyed reading this poem as it has true meaning of the art of poetry. you have done a great job. keep it up.
    you are truly an amazing writer....
    a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    Its romanting. the flow of words was good. you used very nice and loely words in your poem take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This lol is a lovely poem buti still in shock at your age and your feeling this lol???

    xxx alex xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    This was a beautiful poem! i enjoyed reading this one! well written keep it up!

  • 13 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Wow, full of emotion. If this is
    true..you're only 12. But anyways
    The second to last stanza should be
    reduced to fit and match the other
    stanzas lines. Keep up the great work.
    <3Tay(^_^)
    God bless 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Well wriiten the word choice was great, and the flow was flawless, the emtion was clear. You did an excellent job on this one 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!..very sweet poem...but..lol...jusat 12 n u've penned this one so properly...i mean portrayed emotions in such a real manner...
    Great work!
    Kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Delicious 42

    Great Experiment.

    &hearts;,
    Delicious 42

  • 13 years ago

    by Chris Sanchez

    This poem really speaks to me. Like it really paints a picture of whats going on and the way you wrote it... was deep. You can sense the intimacy and emotions going on as the story continues. Your pretty talented. Feel free to message me anytime =]]

  • 13 years ago

    by Spirit

    Girl I really hate you right now. ok fine i don't HATE you but I am mad that you write better poems than i do

  • 13 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Wow, I'm impressed with this one. I can't believe you so young. You have a remarkable talent. Keep it up. 5/5

    marcella

  • 13 years ago

    by Emma

    Scandaloussssss
    haha
    but i loved it.....it was crazy good:) 5/5 and this is added to my favorites