Excellent poem, I really enjoyed this, very captivating. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Lovely Acrostic...Beautifully penned...and...very sweet poem...kp up de good work!
xxPoojaxx

Amazing poem. I like the words you used and also it was very sweet! Really got nothing bad to say about it :) Keep up the great work!

Very good your description was great the flow was a bit off but the emotion seeped through the whole piece good work Plot121

Okay, this was beautiful.. I am big on punctuation.. And though there were periods on the last two stanzas, there were none on anything else.. The very last stanza needs only one period.

The message you gave was great. I really liked this line..

"Ignite my heart with burning passion"

It just is so strong. The entire poem was strong, very powerful and very emotional. It just grabs you and hangs on. lol.. If you know what I mean.

For being new at writing love poems.. You do well at it.. It is all about coming from your heart, and I think this one did.. If it didn't you sure did a great job of making it look that way.

Keep up the good work, and continue posting.
All in all, just a beautiful poem. =)

5/5 of course.
~Ally~

I loved the message you portrayed throughout this poem i found it to be great. Sweetly written love poem with strong meanings and nice vocab. Good work with this loved it ~mel

Marc. My bro. Haha. :) I super love yours than mine. Haha. I hope i can steal your poems. Hahaha. Kidding. ;)

I like your choice of words. XD. I think its great and so sweet too. Nothing but a 5

Exellent poem, i love your choice of words and the flow was great, 5/5

Beautiful. A well written and profound piece, Marco (I hope you don't mind me calling you that. I'm just so used to typing the 'o' after! :)
There are minor things you can alter to tweak this piece a little:

"Elegant beautiful angel mistress" - put a comma after the 'beautiful' and 'angel', so it reads: "Elegant, beautiful, angel mistress".

"Name anything you like my angel I'll give it", you could change that to "Name anything you want and I shall give it to you".

And finally, "Engraved your love forever in my heart", just take off the 'd' in the word 'engraved'.

It's up to you if you wish to change the aspects I have picked out, I just think it would make the poem a lot more effective. Overall, a wonderful write. Very well done :).

I love it. :D
A really sweet poem. You did a great job with this poem. I love acrostic, a lot of people can't pull it off though. YOU DID!
Keep it up hun.

Very well done. The imagery was vivid, the emtion was strong, the beauty of this poem was wonderfully chosen, and the word choice was amazing. You did an excellent job 5/5

This was beautiful.
The first line really pulled me in, it was a very strong opener.
The poem flows well throughout, and the imagery and word choice were a joy to read.

Great poem 5/5

"Ignite my heart with burning passion"
How do you come up with this stuff, im tellin you, you have tellin talent in your writting it is so beautiful...5/5 agian.

Sweet, oh so sweet.
I love love poems when they're good.
Hate them when they're rubbish.
That's why I try to stay away from them unless requested.

But this was, excellent.
I loved your word usage.

"Ignite my heart with burning passion
Confine me in your arms forever please."

^^ ADORED these lines.

Great writee, xo.

Oooooeeeehoooeeewiieeeeee ^_^

yours is like 102830980398 times better than mine ^_^ I really like it, those lines.. each one is so beautiful. =] Straight from you heart. Gosh.. wow.. ^^

xxx