I have read you poem it was short but sweet. goodwork. you can carry on your work.

Wow this poem was so short yet so powerful. It held so much meaning to me. I loved it. And I definatly agree with this message sometimes you dont know what you have until its gone and then by that time its to late. The metaphore that you used for this couldn't have been better. Nice work.

One word amazing. This is by far the best I have read of yours. Short but so very powerful. The message you portrayed held so much truth into it. One thing though I think you should capitalise the first letter of each line in this poem it mades it look a little neater. Well done 5/5~mel

I wish this poem had been longer. i would have loved to see you take it further. but otherwise great job!