Again shotr sweet and to the point, but it was a little dry on emtion this time, maybe making it longer could bring out the power a little bit, idk just a thought 5/5

I liked this alot. The only thing that seemed to slip up through this was how you used the word "again" in both the last lines in the last 2 stanzas. It seemed to throw the flow off a bit. A great effort none the less. ~mel