It gave me chills. Loved it!

Beautiful poem hun!!...Kp it up!!...very deep and touching!
Lovely work!
xxPoojaxx

Amazing poem, so deep and well written with many different sides to the story..touching, and well written to boot!

-----lovely work, tara

Great one .. loved it .. keep it up

good job

The anngst and despair of this piece are so powerful. The imagery and wording really sinks home the emotion you've captured so well. Great piece.

Peace,

Grey Ajurahck

I can relate to this in so many ways. I lve your work. You're a phenominal writer with loads of talent. Don't stop.

Very touching and emotional, nicely written, but it isn't my favorite one of yours. You created good imagery, but you should work on the some metaphors for the emotions. I don't want to offend you, or something like that, this is just my opinion.