Here's to "us"

by Noel   May 12, 2007


Yeah I'd paint those gray skies blue if you'd say the word but you, you don't ask much. so does that mean I'll own your heart forever, like it says in the big bold letters on your page? yeah, it's good to see. and late night's are just no fun without you. and i just wanted to say thanks.. you're the only reason I've smiled in days. its perfect the way your eyes met mine, and our hands slide into place. i can't think of nowhere I'd rather be than under this sky with you. you know, living in the city just isn't so pretty at night. when you look up you can't see a god damn star in the sky. but it's not like anyone cares, besides you. i wanna lay forever with you in the sunshine. why don't we wake up in the morning side by side, eye to eye, you and me. heres to "us" being referred to in the future tense. you mean so much to me, but I've never been the best with words.

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  • 15 years ago

    by mandy

    Very beautifuly put. The format you chose was a little hard to follow, but the rest was simply amazing, 5/5!

    -mandy :)

  • 17 years ago

    by BehindThisSmilex

    I love this one.
    good job.

    and thanks for the comment on mine