Love the poem great job...5/5.......your are a really good writter......oh and if you will can you please rate and comment on my poems thankz.....

Wow, you are so talented. I've read all your poems. I added this to my favorites. So far, there are only two favorite poems I had. 5/5!
Congrats!!!

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Nice poem indeed. i love the new style. i dno't read a lot of poems that are in this style. where its 3 lines. and the last line rhymes with the next 3rd line. i look.

5/5 David

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