Debbie
What a beautiful piece. Your kind heart really shines in your words :)
Take care Cindy

Did you post this on your last account as well? Cos it strikes a chord with me.
With all your poems, this has such depth and hidden meanings just waiting to be found
And for such a short piece it says so much =)
5/5 sweets
*Gem*

I liked it...

Beautiful piece of poetry you have written here. The meaning behind this was portrayed nicely as in all of your poems. It held alot of information throughout it and i found it to be quite capturing well done~mel

If everyone on this earth could be happy, then we'd be in heaven... great job5/5

Short words with a perfect flow. I loved reading this poem. It really flows well. Keep up the good work. Ur very cute in deed. I saw you in your profile. Lets be friends...

With love
Fsams

I sometimes feel like that too =) I like the way you put it in a poem! xxx

I like this one alot, and the poem that i wrote was not my FIRST poem ever. it was my first poem published on here. lol :)

Great poem thanks for the comment on "babe's story"

You have the most clearest messages when you write.your personality reeally shines through in your poems.
5/5

I loved the emotion in this poem! It was short, but full of meaning. To stop the pain that everyone feels would be a great accomplishment indeed.
How you worded this poem also added to it. Particularly how you repeated, "I shall no longer cry in vain."Great job, keep it up :D! 5/5

With all due respect,
Hatori
The Illusionist

Short... but amazing. i really think that you can tell how genuine the emotion is just from reading it. i love the first two lines. great job!

I liked it. It was a little short but it was good. I gave it a 5/5.

I like this poem but it is more like a verse you should try adding more to it. I think it would be great with more added but it is another great poem. 5/5

I like this poem but it is more like a verse you should try adding more to it. I think it would be great with more added but it is another great poem. 5/5