Good poem
i like the fact the first and the last verses rhyme
keep the good poems oging
xxx

Excellent write sweets.
I adored the repetition, it made the poem flow with such a fast paced beat and the ending was like a thud to the heart.
Well done!!
5/5
*Gem*

I got in! I don't know how exactly but anyways when I figured out I was able to get into the love section here at work, your poems I came to first! Anyways this was a good poem, feeling like we wasted our time on somebody is not a great feeling, but in time things get better. Great job!! 5/5