This has a very powerful meaning.. good job!.. Keep up the great work!

A nice depth to this one, it has a lot of levels that this could be interpreted on.
Kudos
5/5
*Gem*

Deep and sad, an excellent combnation. You did antoher brillant job, on a another awesome write. 5/5

Siick poem great and powerful meaning

Yeah, i liked it, i thought it could have been lomger but the message got across well and it was really powerful.
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