Twisted ending there! I was completely drawn to it. Wonderful. XD

Wow, your poems are catching my eyes.. I love it...

Wow this was sooo freaky.. it reminded me of a grieving husband who lost his wife and is know seeing her in his dreams and stuff maybe like a ghost.. Wonderful job. I loved it.

Wow this was sooo freaky.. it reminded me of a grieving husband who lost his wife and is know seeing her in his dreams and stuff maybe like a ghost.. Wonderful job. I loved it.

This is a very powerful poem! great imagery! flow was good! I like the ending! I really enjoyed this one! good job! 5/5!

For he had berried his wife long ago
berried should be buried. Other than that it flows fast, and the emtion is strong. excellent job on a well written poem 5/5

Wow, unexpected ending, deserved that 5/5