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Twisted ending there! I was completely drawn to it. Wonderful. XD
by Lesbian Natalie
Wow, your poems are catching my eyes.. I love it...
by Ashleigh Skye
Wow this was sooo freaky.. it reminded me of a grieving husband who lost his wife and is know seeing her in his dreams and stuff maybe like a ghost.. Wonderful job. I loved it.
by Marc Ortiz
This is a very powerful poem! great imagery! flow was good! I like the ending! I really enjoyed this one! good job! 5/5!
For he had berried his wife long ago
berried should be buried. Other than that it flows fast, and the emtion is strong. excellent job on a well written poem 5/5
by Christina Yap
Wow, unexpected ending, deserved that 5/5