Comments : Really seeing?

  • 13 years ago

    by Sydney

    Twisted ending there! I was completely drawn to it. Wonderful. XD

  • 13 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    Wow, your poems are catching my eyes.. I love it...

  • 13 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow this was sooo freaky.. it reminded me of a grieving husband who lost his wife and is know seeing her in his dreams and stuff maybe like a ghost.. Wonderful job. I loved it.

  • 13 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow this was sooo freaky.. it reminded me of a grieving husband who lost his wife and is know seeing her in his dreams and stuff maybe like a ghost.. Wonderful job. I loved it.

  • 13 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    This is a very powerful poem! great imagery! flow was good! I like the ending! I really enjoyed this one! good job! 5/5!

  • 13 years ago

    by Vanessa

    For he had berried his wife long ago
    berried should be buried. Other than that it flows fast, and the emtion is strong. excellent job on a well written poem 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Christina Yap

    Wow, unexpected ending, deserved that 5/5