Ah this was so sad and perfect. i found love present in this poem too.

5/5 David

Another lovely poem Laura. You tell the story behind a sold frame. You show how the people tell you that you don't have to, followed by a different set of words each time. Nicely done Laura, lovely poem.
5/5

I really appreciate this poem of urs. It's fantastic. I loved the writing style.

Hey..I love this poem..it rocks! **Sarah**

Dear. Spaces after comma's!

i die = I die

I don't get this poem at all. It doesn't ... click with me dear. I think you need to work moreso on your portrayal rather than your vocabulary. Also, you have some horribly good examples of forced rhyme.

I'll leave the vote out, you wouldn't be please.

Sorry to be so critical.

Sigh.

~Stephen White

I loved this one..great style of writing....it was sad...yet well penned..Good write filled with emotion....kp it up!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

Great job on the poem, and wording was very good ,loved it , it was very sad but you did a great job on it. your friend Tracy ~5/5~

Nice poem..