The real pain

by Nat   May 13, 2007


Rip my heart my out and never feel love again
Erase the thoughts , memories, and feelings,
for what I've had for you.
Time keeps going by for every second counts,
which is being entirely filled by agony.
No longer will I have to cry and
No longer will I have to care...
Cause I truely know the end is now.

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  • 16 years ago

    by gack60

    Nice piece, good use of vocabulary,the only critique i have is in the first stanza you say "rip my heart my out" other than that it would have been a 5/5.

    well done

    Gary.

    4/5

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