Well, I like it. flowed nicely, sad and beautiful at the same time. yupp.. pretty nice. One thing though, if you added some punctuation and stuff it'd be perfect. I still like it all the same though. 5/5

Thanks for the comment.
Happy writing,
Hannah-

As a father of both sons and daughters
is was crazy reading this piece IT WAS A GOOD READ AND A eye opener too
I love my kids the same both its diffent
doing things with sons then daughters
and vis vesa it just diffent but i like to think equal but from reading this poem I'll look at it better so thanks cy