Hey sweet

it seems cool but bit hard to imagine it with out music as we dont know wha it sounds liek with it lol

but cool good luck with it
bye

I like this alot! it would be awesome to hear it to music. i write songs & i post them as well. check them out & let me know wut u think. xoxo

Hey now this is awesome, now i am so totally going to be ready to listen to this. :P

5/5 David

Hey hun
its cool you should be well pleased... was it a band what sang it and you and other just wrote it for them???

that girls voice in it is well good she reminds me of kelly clarkson.. well written love

This is great!
Very well written!!
I cant really imagin it without hearing it.. but thats ok. the words work together very well. and.. it flowed really well.. 5/5