A lovely night

by linda   May 14, 2007


Candles in the dark
moon is shining between the clouds
stars whispering in the air
the word of love
love that fell from up above
touched us and stimulated our hearts
motivated our feelings in the middle of the night

he looked at me with half opened eyes
he smiled at me with a mysterious look
he came closer and touched my hand
he squeezed my hips with a very gentle hug
he passed his hands around my neck
he whispered in my ears love and desire

my heart kept on beating
my body started to sweat
i felt diziness
i couldn't stand on my legs
i relaxed between his hands
and from that moment love was shared.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Very powerful. i loved it
    :):)

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    I am glad to rrc your first poem. This is a greatly flowing poem. Each line is cohesive and the links make the poem strung wholely. Great love poem

    Your friend
    Fsams