Comments : This is where it ends; and tries to begin again

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffani

    Oooh. this is sweet. and well written, i feel ur pain im sry

    its still a cute poem tho 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is so sad. I know exactly what you mean and its hard trust me. 5/5

    <UnToLd TrUtH>

  • 16 years ago

    by That One Girl

    I can really relate to this one... good job!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Bittersweet. One of the things a person needs to master in his lifetime is detachment. Otherwise, it will be painfully difficult for him to let go of the times gone by and move ahead to a brighter future. Nice one.

  • Good one