This was a great poem! Great Messege and very intresting topic! i give this a 5/5

I'm not too big on rhyming but i loved this poem. the flow was great.5/5

Beautiful...penned in an amazing manner..loved it...
kp it up!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

I have to say, i loved it. the way you described what you wanted and how it closes the door, it was well written