It's good to see a style of poem up there. When a writer can write a variety of styled poems it really shows that they have talent, that's my opinion anyway. So well done on this. Acrostics can be difficult to write, having to make the lines flow on together, but you did a great job of this. An intimate, yet romantic poem. =] 5/5

Tammie

Awww David!!
This is so cute and beautiful
I loved it
Your poems always give me a warm feeling inside
I know sounds cheesy huh!
lol well this poem was another one of my favorites from you
I love it!
5/5
love always
Kaila

Different but good ,well done.

David
Nice job on the poetry form. These are very hard to master. You did a great job!
Take care Cindy

Wow...so interesting...When i looked the title..I thought it was a sad one..you got me hunny
and the wording was really great
Keep it up,
Your friend
Laura

Wow!!...david this 1 is sooo cute n beautiful...vey very sweet..filled with love n..soo romantic...short yet perfectly said!!...loved it!!
Kp writing!!:-)
5/5 as always :D
xxPoojaxx

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Very interesting. I liked it.

~*Alex*~

P.S Check out my stuff if you would like.

Beautiful poem! you did a good job writing this one! flow was good! well done lol I thought this was a sad one XD anyway well penned keep writing! 5/5!

Beautifully written. few lines yet so much meaning

Try capitals on all the first letters of the word nothing.

WOW!