Comments : Night Time Adventure

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very sweet and happy little poem....sure the kids will love it! I love how you incorporated so many of the best loved children's characters into the verses.

  • 16 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    Beautiful if only all children had this sweet slumber

  • 16 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Cindy
    You did a great job on this childrens poem. I know my 3 are going to love hearing you read this to them.

    Off we flew into the night-time sky
    Leaving our travels and new friends behind
    Again in our beds dreaming hours away
    Till next time there's another adventure to find.

    I love the way you ended this. It makes you think that there will be more to come.
    Great.
    All the best
    Ben

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Aw. This is soo cute hehe, and as a kid, I love it! 'Twas simply adorable... =] Thank you for sharing! Love, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is such a beautiful poem, so very much refreshing and with the power to make u close ur eyes and frly away to those lovely days...an amazing work indeed dear

    Off we flew into the night-time sky
    Leaving our travels and new friends behind
    Again in our beds dreaming hours away
    Till next time there's another adventure to find

    beautiful ending too.....very creative

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was quite interesting debb, It was beautiful at the same time and i found it to be really cute. This was an amazingly penned poem and i found the ending to be great. Well done on a nicely written poem. Very creative~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    Fantasic cindy, i love hwo you intertwined all the old nursery rhymes and classic stories, it brings back vague memories, something i never had myself, but this brought back the childhood happiness i miss so much, thankyou, xox lithium

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Cinthia its a v nice poem. U hav included cool characters. Keep taking us to new new adventures. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    I missed this one!
    It was so gorgeous Cindy!
    I loved recognising all the different characters you included in this piece!
    It was outstanding!
    Excellent rhythm as always m'dear =)
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    I missed this one!
    It was so gorgeous Cindy!
    I loved recognising all the different characters you included in this piece!
    It was outstanding!
    Excellent rhythm as always m'dear =)
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Amazing truly amazing. Fantastic work, keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Cindy, i smiled while reading this, it was nice to remember all the nursery rhymes and characters.
    Thank you so much
    love Tara-Kay
    xxxx