I really enjoyed this...it was very creative and original, and the first few lines really pulled me in.
Flow was flawless throughout, imagery created vivid pictures and the word choice was a pleasure to read.

I liked it. I liked how you changed the suffix for the same word. It was creative. Nice job man. 5/5

Aww, i love it.. 5/5
loving the flow and the word usage
i noticed the way you used the same words at the end but with a differ ending

This is so beautiful i love it...it really makes me think and i love that..5/5

I don't know how you managed to do it but you tied it all together real nice. The flow was a bit off for my taste but the poem was great read Plot121

Awww.this 1 is surely hood..very creative peice ...the way u used add n subtract thing worked out magic on this beautifl poem..though the flow was a tad off..the words chosen n the beautiful ending of this 1 adds to the beauty....Good wrk!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Hey,
this poem is very creative, I like it, It sure did impress me! I like the rhyming and the flow was quite good, I enjoyed reading it 5/5
kisses stephanie

Ahh that was a great poem, i loved how you set it up. good job 5/5

Another great one from you. It was a great write. It was sweet and to the point. Keep up the great work. 5/5

WoW, i really enjoyed reading that its such an amazing piece of poetry which flows perfectly.
i can see that you write raps by readin it, lol it does have that flow. i really like the rhyimg its great

Amazing poem, excellently written. Keep up the fantastic work.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Hey this poem was very well written i loved it!!! Keep up the good work!! 5/5
*Angela Michele*

P.S would you go and read/comment my poems too please!!

This is really good...it's different and I've never read anything put together like that. Aswesome! Good work!
~Kayla

I love it , its very nice and beautiful good work 5/5

I love how you used nouns at the end of one line and the verb with the same root word in the other.
its really well written .

also, i loved how you used math, like subtracting and equations to show your feelings .

nice job . its a truly amazing and orginal poem.
i've never read anything like that before .

excellent job . keep writing .

Its really good, it came from the heart

Hey this was wonderful!!! I loved it.
ttyl
Delicious

So, i'm sure you know what i'm about to say. i like the whole ending of the lines... ya know, the "-ion"... "-ing". it's very unique. kept my attention. good job.