Comments : Without you

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful beautiful poem!!...the repetition have made the poem look so intense..and the poem is sooo sweet..it's like you r pouring out your thoughts through this 1...good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Another great poem! you're really talented! you should be proud! flow was good for me! I really enjoyed reading this one. 5/5!

    My favorite stanza.

    I would rather the heavens take me
    Than for you to forsake me
    Blowing my smoke to the clear blue sky
    I would pray the Lord let me die