The caress of Lonliness

by Hannah Emellia   May 17, 2007


Save me from the blackest stars,
All I know are blood and scars,
Lost in a world where no one cares,
A broken soul, there's nothing there,

Faded, bruised, a shattered past,
Melt my heart of iron cast,
Til every little piece dissolves,
This is too far, it can't resolve,

afraid to love, afraid to feel,
This is too good, it can't be real,
Losing sight of sanity...
Damn my thoughts of vanity,

Lost in love's divine caress,
Afraid of lies and loneliness,
A broken past that all could see,
A far from perfect, shattered me.

Me and my sister (In Spite Of Love) wrote this, she wrote the last too lines in each stanza.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda HEARTCORE

    Wow, Mo said my thought exactly. You have really good word choice. Good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Wow, that was great! The third and fourth stanzas are probably my favorite, though all of them are really great! I especially liked the word choice....this poem had amazing word usage. Good job to you and your sis!