Comments : The Flower Blossomed In My Heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent poem of love. Your love shines in this piece.

    Only the flower I desire
    Nay the flower blossomed in my heart
    Like everlasting memories
    You are saved in my heart

    These lines are really touching. I love the message you added .
    Take care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Wow great acrostic style n the flow is awsome. 5/5 for this special piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Nice poem another acrostic style but I liked how you kept it hidden. My favorite part in this was

    O
    N
    L
    Y
    and what was written their it was capturing sweet and amazingly written. I think you did a great job with such heartfelt lines. Loved this well done~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    Beautiful peom! It was filled with heart and love, and I liked how you made it into an acrostic. Excellent work, you are an amazing writer!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem is beautifully written. I like it very much. Third stanza is the greatest. Atmosphere that you created is amazing. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    The poem was nice and had some good images to them very heart felt but seemed to go on a tangent from time to time good none the less Plot121