Ooo! I love how you're branching out to different genre's now!
You have a knack for this dark poetry!
I loved how the beast could be a metaphor for so many things!! lol
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

Nice poem! Dark and yet very true. I guess everyone has a beast within, and you are so right it can be controlled. Good job! I really liked this one.

Wow!!.love thsi 1...well penned dark poem..lol...n it's soo true.......lol...i like d the description n the way u used "Beast"...great work...powerful...n true!
Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

I like the metaphor that you have created with this poem. The flow is good.

Regards,

Steven

Wow, a wicked dark poem!!
I love it.
I totally get what you are saying with it. Everyone has 'the beast' in them.
Most of the time its MY OWN which scares me. Dont realise im capable of some things till they are done.
This is a tremedous poem. Deserves nothing less than 5/5!

Kelly
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Same critic as for the mission. good story and really liked the end!!! the beast is actually within u. for the surprise ending and philosophic subject that it brings that's at least a 4/5!

I very much enjoy this dark poem, it reminds me of the book of revelation in the bible. btw just to comment on a comment u made in one of reborn's poems, there is nothing u can do to make God love u more, and there is nothing u can do to make God love u less. He along with all his angels are always listening.