Comments : I scared him

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aw this is sad. Yeah sometimes its better to be quiet anyway good poem! keep writing! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    No stop. i love talking to you. it is cool. this poem relaly spoke to me.

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany Nichole

    Hey girl!! if you scared him he wasn't worth your time!! love you and miss being at school with you!! awsome poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    This poem is so sad. 5/5
    Check mine out

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wonderful poem - So sad & pain filled.
    The flow was flawless & the word usage was good.

    && Hun, if he got scared then you can do better... The best thing in life is to find someone who loves you back, FLAWS & ALL.... You can better. =] Stay strong.

    Overall, the poem was great! Keep writing! 5.5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Perfect poem I feel the same way about myself, the flow was good and vocabulary was excellent in this one , like I said maybe I should take your advice and do the same, thanks great job, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    I enjoyed this poem. A great read... Keep up the great writting.

  • 16 years ago

    by Corey Smith

    I liked this poem it was nice to read

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxSurrenderToMyWrathxXx

    This is cute but sad! I like it! Try to check out some of my work if you have time!